Illogicopedia:VFH/A Day in the Life of a Golf Ball

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A Day in the Life of a Golf Ball

Score: 7 (7-0)	Nomination by Avril Troll 13:30, 25 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC)
For:	It made me laugh. And the face on the gold ball... Avril Troll 13:30, 25 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC) for Guess what? THis was a writing prompt in my writing class: Imagine you are a golf ball on a mini golf course. Write what a day is like. And now it's up for feature. And by the way MMF, I tweaked the ending a bit... doesn't seem much better now to me but I want to see what you think. Readmesoon (The Desperate Book) 16:22, 24 Octodest 2023 Fore! This is the definition of feature material. T3 It has been four months. Hehehehe. This is feature material. -- Dxpenguinman, the Penguinman ...He's e-vile! • Talk • Got An Idea? • GAMESHOW! 09:18, 29 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC) Very funny my promt for the essay was not as funny. Somehow the way you told it in class cracked me up. The words retarded and metaly challenged can get anyone to laugh right.~ King Wib (bread) 22:28, 29 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC) I really did like it. Indeed. CamelToe 23:08, 1 Octodest 2008 (UTC) Nice. -- Hindleyak  Converse • ?blog • Click here! 12:08, 13 Octodest 2008 (UTC)
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Comments:	Abstain for now. It gets weak towards the end. Improve the ending and I'll definitely vote yes, it's a cool article. MMF!→talk←/→admin(:D) 16:37, 25 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC) It's a nice idea, but it needs a bit of a man-up before I can vote for. Play on some of the ideas you've got there and make me laugh basicly. --Testostereich • (ballsack) 13:18, 29 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC)

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