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Story

Score: 1 (3-2) Nomination by T3 20:06, 4 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
For:
  • Nom and For - It's hard enough to write a funny article, much less a funny EPIC. Amazing job. --T3 20:06, 4 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
  • For --vaGinonater I exist! 03:55, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
  • Fwoar!!! One of the longest articles on ?pedia that actually is a story. It took work. -- mwow513My Articles!Talk to me 04:35, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
Against:
  • I couldn't break into it. There was this impenetrable sea of words that stopped me enjoying it, so against Testostereich(ballsack) 07:34, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
  • Yeah, pretty similar to Testes, but apart from that the way it was written wasn't pritcularly interesting, didn't draw me in. You went from Story to conversation with the reader and back several times, your grammar was pretty bad and a ton of sentences were incomplete/run ons without puncuation which annoys the crpap out of me. Also, for me the ideas sort of flopepd, and I never found myself laughing. —rms talk 16:05, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
Comments:
  • Testostereich: What about your articles, Revision, Digging a Hole or even The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe? --T3 07:36, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
    • I never voted for any of them :P to be honest I think Lion is crap, revision is alright, and Digging a Hole I like if you get into it. If you put them up for feature and voted against I wouldn't exactly cry or anything. The point here wasn't length anyway, it was just the sort of expanse of words without really making me laugh/sucking me in. If it had been length I'd be a bit callous really Testostereich(ballsack) 07:41, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
    • You have small testicles. --vaGinonater I exist! 07:44, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
    • What the hell does "sea of words" mean? No offense, that's the worst excuse I've ever seen. --mwow513My Articles!Talk to me 07:45, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
      • fine, since my opnion is an excuse now, I think this article is mediocre, I didn't enjoy it, wasn't sucked in, and didn't laugh one bit. I almost fell asleep. My bulging sack aside I think this is just one in a huge recent trend of mediocre articles that have flooded the VFF by the gold star brigade and I don't see why it should be featured. Testostereich(ballsack) 07:48, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
        • 2 things: #1: Grow out your testicles. #2: Check out mah new article. By the way, none of this is meant to hurt your feelings, this is just the way I like to talk to you. --vaGinonater I exist! 07:50, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
          • W/e newb. And I think I already read your latest article, was it yours or RMS's which was about Eisenhouer? Also, why should I grow out of my testicles, I've hopefully still got a long reproductive future of threesomes ahead of me. Testostereich(ballsack) 07:52, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
            • Did you like it? And also, RMS and I are available for threesomes. I've been known to kick in bed. --vaGinonater I exist! 07:56, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
              • I think I'll stick with my Taiwanese ladyboyladyboyladyboyboyboyladyboyboyladydogboyboy, but thanks for the offer. *tries to remember what happens at the end, oh, oh yeah* Yeah it wasn't bad. Testostereich(ballsack) 07:58, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)
  • abstain there's like, so much to read ^^" MMF3.jpgMyMetalFunktalk 06:10, 23 Ergust 2009 (UTC)

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