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Illogic Book/Page 2525[edit | edit source]

This is the first page of a small story I kinda want reviewed (just follow the links to the next page at the bottom) - it's a neat little story, and no one has ever reviewed an illogic book passage before so I thought why the fnurdle not. Se what you make of it

Testostereich(ballsack) 10:21, 20 Aym 2008 (UTC)

Concept: 7 Nothing too special, stories and such have been done before, but still quite good.
Execution: 9 Executed very well. Made me lol a little (maybe a wee bit too coherent at times?), but not quite Uncyclopedia content (maybe?). I liked the ending.
Grammar and Formatting: 10 No problems here.
Images: 4 Could have used a couple.
Miscellany: 9 Five tons of flax.
Final Score: 39 Get ya tits out luv.
Reviewer: Aaaaannooooo!!! 18:37, 11 Yoon 2008 (UTC)