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R.I.P[edit | edit source]

A quick epic I made to stave off revision. I hope you like it --Testostereich • (ballsack) 10:25, 18 Aym 2009 (UTC)

Concept: 10 Duh
Execution: 10 Duh
Grammar and Formatting: 10 Duh
Images: 0 There aren't any.
Miscellany: 4 Ahem... These are corrections to the part about the football game.
  1. Americans don't use the word "pitch" to refer to a field.
  2. The Redsox (with an X) are a baseball team.
  3. A score of 23-22 is EXTREMELY unrealistic. You would have to have like two safeties for each team to get those scores.
  4. I'm a football fan and I'm not fat.
  5. Google is a great tool for information.
Final Score: 34 I wanted to review this because I remember seeing it up for review ages ago. I looked at the article, saw the epic tag and decided not to review it. I've come to correct my mistake.
Reviewer: 23:31, 9 Yoon 2011 (UTC)
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