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Spider Man[edit | edit source]

I released this right along with Spider Man 3, I thought I did pretty good :( Guess not. Mr. Briggs Inc. 11:06, 15 Aym 2008 (UTC)

Concept: 8 Nice concept. I like th whole superhero pathetic concept, though it has been throwan around quiet a lot.
Execution: 8 I thought you executed it well. I liked the was you related everything to his crapitude though it did get a little unclear at some points.
Grammar and Formatting: 7 Grammar wasn't great. I noticed quite a few spelling mistakes and the language could of been a little clearer at times.
Images: 10 Lol@thatvenomimage
Miscellany: 8 I still don't know what micellany is so I'll just give you an 8, because that's what I'd give tha article overall.
Final Score: 41 A very decent article, could do with a tiny bit of a tidy up. When sorted I may consider VFF'ing it.
Reviewer: --Testostereich(ballsack) 13:08, 15 Aym 2008 (UTC)