Talk:Arizona Online Dating Success Dating
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The fact that the dating guide is randomly interrupted by movie-making tips makes me want to clean it up a bit and leave it be. --T3 19:41, 1 Ergust 2014 (UTC)
- Alright, I added an intro and outro. I cleaned up the grammar, deleted superfluous sentences, and broke up the sections. Also, I made the last line really big and deleted the sentence after it because it made me laugh out loud when I first read it. I think I did okay. --T3 19:56, 1 Ergust 2014 (UTC)