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One chipmunk not a rodent

....I felt that this is one of my greatest stories. I want opinions so i can try for a possible feature.

|Fonchezzz| Quacking| 20:08, 12 Arche 2008 (UTC)

REVIEW PLEASE--|Fonchezzz| Quacking| 13:28, 22 Arche 2008 (UTC)

Concept:	9	Cool concept. Excellent potential for all kinds of absurdity.
Execution:	8	It's good, but could go for a bit of expansion. I think this idea warrants a longer article, but that's just me. All kinds of bizarre things could happen to a chipmunk.
Grammar and Formatting:	8	Didn't notice any grammar mistakes.
Images:	9	That was a damn cool image.
Miscellany:	8	Nice article. Random, but not in a bad way. If you're shooting for a feature I'd plan to expand it a little, maybe add some dialogue and a supporting character. Possibly a hamster?
Final Score:	42	Just noticed you said you were leaving the site. URRGH. Don't leave!!!11!11
Reviewer:	--|Fonchezzz| Quacking| 22:18, 27 Arche 2008 (UTC)

Ooyah! Diggin' up Pee Reviews o' the past. It's a nice little story but IMHO it needs breaking up somewhat. I split it into some paragraphs for ye but maybe it needs some headings - you decide. Image is mint: if we has a Highlighted Image I'd nom it - maybe we could see some more? I imagine the whole article to be black and white gangster movie style.... I'd love to see a b&w pic of Chipper sin a bar smoking. A bit of dramatising and overstating and we may have a winner on our hands. -- This review provided by The French Chipmunk Chef on a break from cooking shoes. 18:36, 9 Arply 2008 (UTC)