Illogicopedia:Review/That thing in the middle of your face
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That thing in the middle of your face[edit | edit source]
My first longish article. Perhaps it sounds too serious... meh. I'll see what you think.Fishalishalish 23:19, 29 Serpeniver 2008 (UTC)
| Concept: | 9 | Few concepts are perfect. |
| Execution: | 10 | Executed as well as it could have been. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 9 | Is good, but has not yet attained legendary grammar-formatting nirvana |
| Images: | 6 | An article that long needs more than one pretty picture to break up the text. The one image there is made me kind-of lol, so it isn't all bad. |
| Miscellany: | 10 | I lol'd. |
| Final Score: | 44 | Possibly VFH-worthy. Like so many articles here, it lacks sufficient images. Maybe an anomatical diagram of a nose, with a caption about the hypothesised protrusion? |
| Reviewer: | Aaaaannooooo!!! 20:24, 12 Octodest 2008 (UTC) | |