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The Almighty mackerel[edit | edit source]
The Penguin 10:00, 12 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
| Concept: | 6 | Hmm....well let's see, it was creative, sure a fish god, but maybe just not too creative enough. You shall hath wiped his fish. |
| Execution: | 4 | It was quite a bit messy and the way it's set out is not that good, but it'll do. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 5 | It was not that well formatted. It was okay, but you could do better....much better. Dibble |
| Images: | 3 | A fish....ha ha. How amusing. More images, if you mind or the bananas may eat your soul. |
| Miscellany: | 6 | it was quite miscellaneous with you're eating me and plates and things, but more randomness if you PLEESE. Or once again, the apples will suck your life force. |
| Final Score: | 24 | 5. Overall, the average is 5. It's quite good, but improvements are needed, it's too short, however it's illogical and illogicality and blech are the keys to success, along with Donkeys, Monkeys and Oliver Twistkeys. I've seen you do better in your other articles. |
| Reviewer: |  Dxpenguinman, the Penguinman ...He's e-vile! • Talk • Got An Idea? • GAMESHOW!
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S'funny, I like fish - it's got my blessing. Never had mackerel, though. -- Hindleyak Converse • ?blog • Click here! 12:45, 19 Yoon 2008 (UTC)