Illogicopedia:Review/The GCSE Curriculum
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The GCSE Curriculum[edit | edit source]
14:46, 5 Novelniver 2008 (UTC)
| Concept: | 8 | A revamp of an article (of mine which was rather rubbish (what can I say? it was near the start of my IllogiCareer :P)) is always a good idea. Aside from that, taking the mick out of the system's elitism while at the same time how messed up the system can be (everything being an -ology!) is a great idea. I guess it would be better though if it included an example person, following his/her/its abbreviated journey through GCSEs. |
| Execution: | 6 | Kinda hit and miss. It's a massive improvement on my one (obviously) but I can't help feeling that it really shoots down in quality on the list. There's too many real subjects on there which don't need to be there, plus i don't actually understand half of them. Maybe what you could do with most of them is put them in bold, add a colon and in italics and inverted commas put a summary of it: e.g.
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| Grammar and Formatting: | 7 | It's not beautiful but it does the job nicely. My one gripe about the grammar is that it's kinda hard to follow the sentences. But maybe that's because I have a tiny attention span... |
| Images: | 8 | That gandalf pic with its caption is classic! The other one of the book's pretty cool too. But I reckon to save the reader from getting bored on the list there should be two more pics below the gandalf one :P |
| Miscellany: | 7.25 | I averaged this score. Also, I'm extremely happy you still kept the YAR. xD |
| Final Score: | 36.25 | Ermmyeah I think I covered it all. It's a nice article with cool ideas that needs a bit of tweakingnessismshsdofhAGUIASFUIPSEHUOSDFAHFUO PROCRASTINATION |
| Reviewer: |  MMF!→talk←/→admin(:D) 16:14, 5 Novelniver 2008 (UTC)
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