Illogicopedia:Review/Where's Waldo? (the illustrious adventure of Waldo Greenfield)

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Concept:	8	The title's pretty cool, and it set itself up for a concept you managed to hold off until the end. So well done.
Execution:	6.5	It wasn't bad, fairly well written though it perhaps relied a weeny bit too much on the events instead of the writing style itself, but a style is beginning to form so don't blow your nose into my cadaver over it or anything. The Germany in Germany but not in Germany was the high point of the article in my opinion, mainly because it makes sense in a really abstract way. So there we go, a solid 7, my ideas for improvement would be just keep writing and strive to keep on getting better.
Grammar and Formatting:	7	The kind of formatting it was isn't my favourite, but it did suit the article so cool. The grammar, i.e. the phrasing could have been done over a teeny bit to give it maximum effect.
Images:	5	no image, but i'm not harsh enough to give you 0. Whack one in if you want, just give it an awesome caption so it'll draw readers in.
Miscellany:	6.5	Bare in mind my marking of articles is relative to me, where 10 would be something like Melville, or like something amazing. (Except that last article I reviewed which was more of a joke)
Final Score:	33	I just found something on my shoulder
Reviewer:	Testostereich • (ballsack) 09:11, 5 Ergust 2009 (UTC)

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