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Astronomy Wars:The Umpire Strikes Out[edit | edit source]

After reading this I thought it was pretty funny, but I want to see what you guys think. Funny enuff for VFF, or no? Any suggestions are wanted. Readmesoon (The Desperate Book) 00:50, 24 Octodest 2023

Concept: 8 Star Wars thing might be a little overdone generally, but this is actually fairly original.
Execution: 8 Could have been funnier, was possibly a little short.
Grammar and Formatting: 7 Is a little sloppy, could use the attention of someone honed in the arts of MediaWiki.
Images: 7 Would be better with one or two more.
Miscellany: 10 No comment.
Final Score: 40 Is good. Few objections to be had. Touch up formatting, and maybe add another image, and I'd vote for it on VFH.
Reviewer: Aaaaannooooo!!! 20:07, 12 Octodest 2008 (UTC)
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