Illogicopedia:Review/G Jesus

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G Jesus

Whanted a review. ~ ♥ ♠ ♦ ♣ 00:58, 4 Ditzimber 2008 (UTC)

Concept:	8	Jesus is overdone, but this is the first I have seen of this nature. I'll give you a compliment for your imagination.
Execution:	8.5	I chuckled a bits a lots. The quotes were good, Introduction also made me laugh quite a bit. It seems to swerve towards a Bcbkye style near the end however, but that isn't so bad. The brief look at his life could be a bit better, and perhaps you could add a bit more to the ending. However, the other sections make up for those weak parts.
Grammar and Formatting:	8	Some mediocre mistakes. Would you like a free clean up? I'll give you one free of chrage.
Images:	9	I love that pic. 'Nuff said.
Miscellany:	8.375	Averaged the scores.
Final Score:	41.875	The magical powers I have lead me to believe that your score is a 41.875, which isn't bad. As with your news, I would give it a for.
Reviewer:	CamelToe 04:21, 14 Ditzimber 2008 (UTC)