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HowTo:Write an Epic for the Illogic Pickle[edit | edit source]

I made it a while ago, I like it, I want it reviewed and featured thanks.

~~~~ 17:13, 7 Yoon 2008 (UTC)

Concept: 8.5 Appropriate for the occasion and kinda funky. I hadn't seen a HowTo make it to the pickle before, so suffice to say it intrigued me.
Execution: 9 I liked the way you blended the play basis, EPIC based plot devices, instruction-video feel, and general ridiculousness of some of the situations. The 5 or so repetitive people added a touch of class to a mint article.
Grammar and Formatting: 7.5 When setting out EPICS and such it's always difficult to a degree to keep the grammar and formatting consistent and correct. But you did ok, I didn't notice any spelling errors, however the blurb at the beginning of each chapter strained the reader (me) with it's miniscule size. Above average.
Images: 6 Images weren't bad
Miscellany: 8.6 That's the general mark I'd give this article.
Final Score: 39.6 Thumbs up here at the Reich Camp.
Reviewer: Testostereich(ballsack) 21:10, 12 Yoon 2008 (UTC)