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Intelligence

What do you guys think. I made this ages ago, any ideas for improvement? Testostereich • (ballsack) 17:59, 9 Arche 2008 (UTC)

Concept:	6	To be honest the concept is kinda dumb, but I give a better score due to the fact you pulled it off just fine.
Execution:	8	as i said.... good job making a crappy subject great
Grammar and Formatting:	10	didnt find any errors
Images:	9	Love the pictures. I like the irony in the first one
Miscellany:	8	Very good. BUT i noticed it got off track and boring at the end.
Final Score:	41	Hooray. Above par article.
Reviewer:	--|Fonchezzz| Quacking| 20:15, 12 Arche 2008 (UTC)

So what do you suggest? --Testostereich • (ballsack) 18:19, 13 Arche 2008 (UTC)

I suggest a fix up on the ending. Maybe cut out some crap. add new stuff. I dont know specifics. Its up to you--|Fonchezzz| Quacking| 19:00, 15 Arche 2008 (UTC)