Illogicopedia:Review/Mauritania

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Mauritania

I wrote this on a whim. No pictures because I am extremely lazy. Review it up. --T3 03:45, 15 Yoon 2011 (UTC)

Concept:	8	w00t. In other words, the idea was nifty enough, not the shiniest gun in the gun safe, but interesting enough nonetheless. The quotes in the middle of the stuff is pretty fresh, although you overdid it at times. (Discussed later in the execution section.)
Execution:	7.5	The written content, in my eyes, was black, white, and in latin characters. Oh, yeah. Overall I found it rather nice; the information presented was not standard and a yum to read. The quotes, however, were a bit overdone at times. Some were a pleasant break from the typical wall of text, but some were unnecessary and unfunny. Or something. As if I have any taste worth noting.
Grammar and Formatting:	8	I'd say delish, because the quotes are pleasing to my eyes, but I offer two bits of advice: Take some of the quotes out (it congested the article from a visual standpoint; as mentioned above some were unfunny/unnecessary), and add some links. I love hints of blue (and occasionally red O_O) in articles that I read.
Images:	0	Surprise third bit of advice not mentioned in the above section! Put some pictures in the article, you bumming arse.
Miscellany:	8	Put in some images and you have a nicer average.
Final Score:	31.5	Splendid, chap.
Reviewer:	—rms talk 05:19, 15 Yoon 2011 (UTC)