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Nazi[edit | edit source]
binclin 08:29, 2 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
| Concept: | 6 | Nazis.... A mehpic concept. A good title & subject matter, but would need to deliver the goods without going to ranty for it to become good. |
| Execution: | 4.5 | ...didn't deliver the goods. I'm starting to wonder if Binclin has an unhealthy obcession with Nazis, but nonetheless, take a more coherent, perhaps witty stance to improve this article. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 6 | Grammar was shcoking, some what intentionally I'm guessing. Format wasn't great either. |
| Images: | 5 | Not great images tbh. There's so much oppurtunity here! |
| Miscellany: | 4.5 | my score for this article |
| Final Score: | 26 | I hate to criticise, but that's what reviews are for. |
| Reviewer: | 17:46, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) | |
Well, It was my first article and I wanted to do domething completely randumb. Thanks for your thoughts on it, I do agree it needs more spunk but im too lazy. Any tips on how to improve on this and in my future articles? 
binclin Yak your nuts off • AH! WTF? • I got the little bugger! 17:57, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
- You could always make them a little more coherent, and think before you write. -- 18:05, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
I always thought it was dont think at all and just write whatever, Dont know where i got that idea from. binclin Yak your nuts off • AH! WTF? • I got the little bugger! 21:09, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC)