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Strangers[edit | edit source]
Lookout! They're about to come in the house!!!! Mr. Briggs Inc. 21:04, 6 Novelniver 2008 (UTC) Eh?
Mr. Briggs Inc. 21:04, 6 Novelniver 2008 (UTC)
| Concept: | 6 | The idea is ok, pretty average because there are lots of things that have to do with strangers. |
| Execution: | 3 | What is this? Some kind of... of... poem? It doesn't really work out. Put facts, or a story, but not some repetitive nonsense that is like a song. It doesn't really make sense and isn't randumb enough. This website is Illogical, and your article is not that. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 4 | There are lot's of unecessary extra lines. The amount of lines between... stanzas? Is inconsistent. Needs a lot of work. |
| Images: | 5 | It's the ame thing over and over again, basically. Putting the same "strangers" in different photos. And there are too many pictures let's see... there's... 6. And about three lines-worth of content. That's nice. Not really. And by the way, where are the captions? |
| Miscellany: | 4.5 | Averaged. |
| Final Score: | 22.5 | This is my first review. If it seems bad or harsh, feel free to get it reviewed again. |
| Reviewer: | ~ 02:18, 10 Novelniver 2008 (UTC) | |