Illogicopedia:Review/Francisco Goya
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Francisco Goya[edit | edit source]
I think it's alright --~~~~ 22:30, 15 Aym 2008 (UTC)
| Concept: | 6.5 | To be honest it's not the best concept I've came across. I haven't heard of him but it was pulled off fairly well, so uhh, yeah. |
| Execution: | 8 | A pleasant read. It was subtley random and funny, I enjoyed it. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 8 | Great formatting,grammar was good. There was maybe one possible spelling mistaker, but I'm not sure myself how to spell vinegrate. Sentence structure could've been a teensy bit better in some case but generally it worked well. You maybe coud have expanded or cleared up the sections where he kiled his family. And you used and twisce in quick succession in the first paragraph with the sailor picking him up. |
| Images: | 8.5 | One image, I'm guessing he painted it, well placed. |
| Miscellany: | 8 | *hums randomly* |
| Final Score: | 39 | (see all of above) :P |
| Reviewer: | -- 17:37, 18 Aym 2008 (UTC) | |