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Salmon moose[edit | edit source]
I rewrote this completely. I hope you enjoy it. —rms talk 05:43, 14 Yoon 2009 (UTC)
| Concept: | 7 | It's an ok idea, of having something called completely different than what it really is. It had a different tone going here, but it turned out good. |
| Execution: | 8 | I really liked reading it. It was funny, and the tone did well. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 9 | I marked this down cause of the weird edit section thing. Other than that, good job. |
| Images: | 9 | Solid images, it was a bit repetative, but the image does rock. |
| Miscellany: | 8.3 | Averaged. |
| Final Score: | 41.3 | It's a good article. I'm thinking about VFFing this baby. |
| Reviewer: | CamelToe 03:08, 29 Yoon 2009 (UTC) | |