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Suspicious Goat Lurking in the Corner[edit | edit source]
I just wanted to get this reviewed. —rms talk 05:32, 11 Yoon 2009 (UTC)
| Concept: | 6 | This is what really lets the article down, the concept. You did a good job making the article as good as you can but ultimately the concept stopped it dead, it just seemed a bit of a bad concept. |
| Execution: | 6.66 | That probably sounds quite harsh, but 5 to me means average so it pans out. It was ok, not specatcular, it wasn't exactly a great idea to begin with and if you were building it up to the punchline at the end it didn't provide the epic lol's you might have been looking for, just a heh from me. Not bad. COuld've done with a new angle on things to liven it up. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 10 | Formatting is formatting, the images corresponded well with the text and it was laid out nicely. Points in the bag. |
| Images: | 5 | The image itself was pretty well drawn, but it failed to hit home, and the caption was a bit duff. A good image could have made this article. |
| Miscellany: | 6 | sorry, i hate sounding like some reviewy critic guy, but that's what I'd give it. |
| Final Score: | 33.66 | Hampered by a bad concept, but your other stuff is ok, just need to work with better ideas next time :D |
| Reviewer: | 11:35, 12 Yoon 2009 (UTC) | |