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Fat Hippo[edit | edit source]
Yeha, just wanted a review for this. Made it at uncyc and moved it over. Thanks Readmesoon (The Desperate Book) 20:15, 25 Octodest 2023
| Concept: | 9 | "Fat hippos are huge!" |
| Execution: | 8 | I would of preferred some kind of story but the descriptions funny too. |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 8 | Saw some mistakes, nothing THAT bad. |
| Images: | 15 | Hippos + Anything = Awesome ((Am I allowed to put 15?)) |
| Miscellany: | 9 | Anything about hippos is awesome |
| Final Score: | 49 | Overall, nice article. The way you describe it reminds me of my article The OMG Scary Alien. But unlike The OMG Scary Alien Fat Hippo WON'T flop in VFF (Which I nommed it! :-)) |
| Reviewer: | T3 | |
| Concept: | 6 | Not a particularly shining example of a concept |
| Execution: | 6 | It didn't interest me that much ,could be a bit more witty, |
| Grammar and Formatting: | 6 | A bit juvenile in the way it was set out |
| Images: | 5 | images didn't make me laugh |
| Miscellany: | 6 | my average score |
| Final Score: | 29 | slightly below average and meh methinks -- 16:01, 18 Octodest 2008 (UTC) |
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