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Fat Hippo[edit | edit source]

Yeha, just wanted a review for this. Made it at uncyc and moved it over. Thanks Readmesoon (The Desperate Book) 20:15, 25 Octodest 2023

Concept: 9 "Fat hippos are huge!"
Execution: 8 I would of preferred some kind of story but the descriptions funny too.
Grammar and Formatting: 8 Saw some mistakes, nothing THAT bad.
Images: 15 Hippos + Anything = Awesome ((Am I allowed to put 15?))
Miscellany: 9 Anything about hippos is awesome
Final Score: 49 Overall, nice article. The way you describe it reminds me of my article The OMG Scary Alien. But unlike The OMG Scary Alien Fat Hippo WON'T flop in VFF (Which I nommed it! :-))
Reviewer: T3


Concept: 6 Not a particularly shining example of a concept
Execution: 6 It didn't interest me that much ,could be a bit more witty,
Grammar and Formatting: 6 A bit juvenile in the way it was set out
Images: 5 images didn't make me laugh
Miscellany: 6 my average score
Final Score: 29 slightly below average and meh methinks --Testostereich(ballsack) 16:01, 18 Octodest 2008 (UTC)
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