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Flute[edit | edit source]

I just did a rewrite, was wondering what you think. —rms talk 02:13, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)

Concept: 1 Sunny side up please!
Execution: 1 yes, it needs executing.
Grammar and Formatting: 2 Liek, lern ur spellinz and shit
Images: 1 NEEDS MOAR
Miscellany: 3 A car crash in a custard factory would have had more success with this article.
Final Score: 8 Personally, i didn't actually read this article, i just hated it on principle
Reviewer: Silent Penguin 02:26, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
What a review! —rms talk 02:34, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
Wow, Sepp must have really been drunk last night. -- Hindleyak  Converse?blogClick here! 10:42, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
Was i close? --Silent Penguin 18:40, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
Concept: 8 Un-original obviously (because of it's instrumentyness) but I like a rewrite.
Execution: 7.1 I like the concept of it being hard but it gets old.
Grammar and Formatting: 9.543 I like the sub headings. They make it look professional.
Images: 7 Un-original yet again.
Miscellany: 10 I'll give it to ye.
Final Score: 41.643 Another great RMS article. Not in the top ten by you but still good.
Reviewer: T3 23:17, 19 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)