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Flute[edit | edit source]
I just did a rewrite, was wondering what you think. —rms talk 02:13, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
Concept: | 1 | Sunny side up please! |
Execution: | 1 | yes, it needs executing. |
Grammar and Formatting: | 2 | Liek, lern ur spellinz and shit |
Images: | 1 | NEEDS MOAR |
Miscellany: | 3 | A car crash in a custard factory would have had more success with this article. |
Final Score: | 8 | Personally, i didn't actually read this article, i just hated it on principle |
Reviewer: | Silent PenguinLeave Me Alone 02:26, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC) |
- What a review! —rms talk 02:34, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
- Wow, Sepp must have really been drunk last night. -- Hindleyak Converse • ?blog • Click here! 10:42, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
- Was i close? --Silent PenguinLeave Me Alone 18:40, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
- Wow, Sepp must have really been drunk last night. -- Hindleyak Converse • ?blog • Click here! 10:42, 11 Jumbly 2009 (UTC)
Concept: | 8 | Un-original obviously (because of it's instrumentyness) but I like a rewrite. |
Execution: | 7.1 | I like the concept of it being hard but it gets old. |
Grammar and Formatting: | 9.543 | I like the sub headings. They make it look professional. |
Images: | 7 | Un-original yet again. |
Miscellany: | 10 | I'll give it to ye. |
Final Score: | 41.643 | Another great RMS article. Not in the top ten by you but still good. |
Reviewer: | T3 23:17, 19 Jumbly 2009 (UTC) |